习作、望网大老师批 改！搞喊哒！                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              观音娘娘此地过，                                                                                                                                                                   突闻香气扑鼻来                                                                                                                                                                      疑是菊仙接地气                                                                                                                                                                           原是顾店的人和！

菊花颂二首

其一：

飒飒秋风满园栽，

天凉香冷蝶重来。

游人伫足绿野地，
金色映人心花开。



其二：

奇花丛立院西头，

飒爽风姿眼底收。

且将菊茶捧客人，

喜看江洲遍锦绣。
[此贴被古月风于2015-11-8 12:38:39编辑过]

昨天整了一夜搭半夜的“菊茶乡”“芳名扬””发布成功了的！怎么找不着了呢？藏头诗在那里发布？

习作；盼批改！                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       菊茶乡      芳名扬                                                                                                                                                                   人和地里飘花香 杯中飘着菊茶香。                                                                                                                                           茶花乡里菊花香，菊花乡里茶花香。                                                                                                                                         文搭台，                     经济来；                                                                                                                                              全中囯，                      全世界。                                                                                                                                              芳名扬，                      闻香来。                                                                                                                                              仁和乡，                     人人爱！！！

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